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2025年10月24日 星期五

試譯:〈跳着,陪傑克森〉 羅伯特·克里利【Jumping with Jackson-Robert Creeley】

〈跳着,陪傑克森〉  羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)

怨不了太多
年紀之類的話。

單單是呼吸、
自在──已夠意思了

何況還有你這種朋友
能一路坦誠面對

生命,以及那些
我們所為了、和得到的。
 
24/10/2025初稿
 
Jumping with Jackson
By Robert Creeley (From his Unpublished Poems)
 
Cant say much 
Of age and such, 
 
Just its fun to breathe 
And take ones ease 
 
With a friend like you 
Who keeps it true 
 
To life and what 
We came here for and got. 

2025年10月9日 星期四

試譯:〈不在〉 羅伯特·克里利【Absence-Robert Creeley】

不在  羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)

太陽在葉子邊緣,
紋路,缺席的愉悅;
它所曾意味的一切
而今已聚在一起。

日子悉盡過去
雲朵都退得遠遠,
而天空亦即天堂本身;
一個人也只是想

也許是永遠自己一個留在
這無一人的地方──而
身下,卻又恰仍是
它本來的所在。
 
9/10/2025初稿
 
Absence 
By Robert Creeley (from his 2006 collection On Earth)
 
Sun on the edges of leaves, 
patterns of absent pleasure, 
all that it meant 
now gathered together. 
 
Days all was away 
and the clouds were far off 
and the sky was heaven itself,
one wanted to stay 
 
alone forever perhaps 
where no one was, 
and here again it is 
still where it was. 

"No matter what becomes of it, art is local, local to a place and to a person, or group of persons, or just what's in the air despite how vague that sounds. It happens somewhere, not everywhere. When it does so happen everywhere, it has become... purely, a vogue or fashion..."

"...'originality' should imply, in any sense, that he should, is hard to follow. The light moves, so to speak, and those who see it have secured an 'originality' quite beyond that qualified by terms of personality or intent... Taste operates here as well, of course, but again Pound is relevant in that he said, damn your taste, I would like first to sharpen your perceptions, after which your taste can take care of itself."

-Robert Creeley, "Why Bother?", 1962. From (https://publishing.cdlib.org/ucpressebooks/view?docId=ft4t1nb2hc&chunk.id=d0e16379&toc.depth=1&toc.id=d0e15852&brand=ucpress;query=Upanishads#1)

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2025年7月27日 星期日

試譯:〈警告〉 羅伯特·克里利【The Warning -Robert Creeley】

警告  羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)
 
為着愛──我會
擘裂開你的頭,好放入
一枝蠟燭
在眼睛背後。
 
愛是在內裏死掉了;
若我們忘記──
一個護符象徵,它的果效;
及那出其不意的美德
 
27/7/2025初稿
 
The Warning
By Robert Creeley (from his 1962 collection For Love)
 
For love—I would
split open your head and put
a candle in
behind the eyes.
 
Love is dead in us
if we forget
the virtues of an amulet
and quick surprise.

圖片源自網絡。

試譯:〈回音〉 羅伯特·克里利【Echo-Robert Creeley】

回音 羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)
 
走路,一如既往;說話,
思考──因而在,
或擋在路上──當日子
過逝,事情來去,無人、或有人
在側;有路,或連門兒都沒有。
生活是甚麼?當你特意去看它時;
帽子又是甚麼,如不是佮佮嵌的話?
 
25/7/2025稿
 
Echo
By Robert Creeley (from his 2006 collection On Earth)
 
Walking, the way it used to be,
talking, thinking—being in, 
on the way—days after anything 
went or came, with no one,
someone, having or not having a way.
Whats a life if you look at it,
Whats a hat if it doesnt fit.

圖片源自網絡。

2024年9月15日 星期日

試譯:〈當愛靜臨〉 羅伯特·克里利【Love Comes Quietly-Robert Creeley】

當愛靜臨  羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)
 
愛來了:安靜地、
終然地,落
在我的身際、身上
以舊時的方式。
 
我那時知些甚麼
以為自己
就能這樣一直
單獨走下去
 
16/9/2024初稿
 
Love Comes Quietly
By Robert Creeley (from his 1962 collection For Love)
 
Love comes quietly, 
finally, drops
about me, on me,
in the old ways.
 
What did I know
thinking myself 
able to go 
alone all the way.

「黑山詩人一貫的詩觀不斷體現在各人獨特的文字結構和節奏裡,奧遜的『奧奇諾士』(Okeano——海神),鄧肯的『神祇』(Numen),和克依利(Creeley)由於時間及空間急遽前進所產生的恐懼意識,皆能反映出『黑山』詩人對字宙萬物和社會生態所特有的嚴肅態度。他們的詩是一組一組的視覺,聽覺,觸角和感覺活動的記錄。這個記錄所展示的是一個不斷擴大的『民胞物與』的世界觀。」

「克依利寫的是生活的際遇,以及其個人及其鄰近的人和物所發生的關係,他的詩常以簡短的句子和準確的語音說出其縈繞於心無盡的惶惑和失落感。」

「他們(黑山詩人)的詩蘊含著平淡而感人的生命力,流動的句子和跳躍的節奏不停地把詩人在瞬息萬變的宇宙捕捉到剎那印象投射給讀者。他們的聲音誠懇而親切,急切而清晰……他們與詩一起在生命的棘途上探索追求最能表達人類各種行為活動的真實節奏……他們不斷跑回個人和歷史的過去,企圖使那些靜止的剎那活過來,繼續走向將來,他們的視野容得下連天的山,連山的樹,容得下你和我,他們的詩不一定偉大,但一定真摯。」

「克依利唸詩的聲調就給人這樣的一個感覺,他的聲調並不優美也不鏗鏘,卻是那麼的誠懇自然和富有悲劇感,使聽者悠然走進他那憂物憂情的世界。他的詩常常流露出戰戰兢兢,唯恐冒犯任何人或物底完整的心性。他常用短句,並不因為他的氣息短促,而是因為害怕說錯話;他常用猶豫、挫頓的節奏,不是因為他企圖營造特殊的音樂效果,而是因為遲疑如何切實表達現實不斷開展的過程。他對生活沒有多大的信心,搖幌著面具的人群緊緊的圍繞著他,使他惑到極度的不安,面對複雜又不持久的人際關係,他感到絕望而無所適從。他在詩裡追求的是文字的自我拯救("A quest to be saved by words")和現實超越。他的聲音平淡而微帶不安:"Catbird, Catbird. O lady hear me. I have no other voice left."」
-黃德偉,「黑山詩的傳統」,原刊《詩風》第50期,1976年7月。


圖片源自網絡。

2024年5月21日 星期二

試譯:〈回音〉 羅伯特·克里利【Echo-Robert Creeley】

回音  羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)
 
靜靜地坐着、等着
──這從來
都不是件簡單的事。
 
會否還存有
另外一種走向,一段
可以走下去的餘程──
 
就像一剎回聲
停懸在
空中,在
 
聽見之先,
一個字
說出之前。
 
愛是甚麼
它究竟在哪
而人,又是怎來到這裏的?
 
22/5/2024初稿
 
Echo
By Robert Creeley (from his 1982 collection Echoes)
 
It was never
simple to wait,
to sit quiet.
 
Was there still
another way round,
a distance to go—
 
as if an echo
hung in
the air before
 
one was heard,
before a word
had been said.
 
What was love
and where
and how did one get there.

圖片源自網絡。

2024年5月20日 星期一

試譯:〈雨〉 羅伯特·克里利【The Rain-Robert Creeley】

雨 羅伯特·克里利(試譯:淺白)
 
整整一夜,那聲音
又回來了;
一而再落下
這安靜、且鍥而不捨的雨。
 
在我而言,那個
必須被念記、
且時刻堅持着的
自己,究竟是甚麼?是否
 
就是從未能有半刻稍懈,
哪怕是那些急硬
的雨聲
其為我帶來的
 
也不至於是這樣的知感,
如此執着、廝纏──
我可會就此被閉鎖在
這終極的不自在裏。
 
愛人,如你愛我的話,
且躺下在我旁邊;
為了我,且如雨一樣,成為那些
疲憊、愚妄,或那些
 
半存渴欲的、有意識的漠然
的出口。
且濕着──
在一種得體的喜悅裏。
 
20/5/2024初稿
 
The Rain 
By Robert Creeley (from his 1962 collection For Love)
 
All night the sound had
come back again,
and again falls
this quiet, persistent rain.
 
What am I to myself
that must be remembered,
insisted upon
so often? Is it
 
that never the ease,
even the hardness,
of rain falling
will have for me
 
something other than this,
something not so insistent—
am I to be locked in this
final uneasiness.
 
Love, if you love me,
lie next to me.
Be for me, like rain,
the getting out
 
of the tiredness, the fatuousness, the semi-
lust of intentional indifference.
Be wet
with a decent happiness.




圖片源自網絡。

"Coming of age in the forties, in the chaos of the Second World War, one felt the kinds of coherence that might have been fact of other time and place were no longer possible. There seemed no logic, so to speak, that could bring together all the violent disparities of that experience... Of course, the underlying information of this circumstance had begun long before the time with which I am involved. Once the containment of a Newtonian imagination of the universe had been forced to yield to one proposing life as continuous, atomistic, and without relief... There was no place, finally, from which to propose an objectively ordered reality, a world that could be spoken of as there in the convenience of expectation or habit.

The cities, insofar as they are intensively conglomerate densities of people, no doubt were forced to recognize the change previous to other kinds of place. The neighborhood had been changing endlessly, ever since the onslaught of the Industrial Revolution, and change, like it or not, had become so familiar a condition that there was even a dependence on the energy thus occurring. Nothing seemingly held firm and so one was either brought to a depressed and ironically stated pessimism concerning human possibilities, or one worked to gain location in the insistent flux, recognizing the nature of its shifting energies as intimate with one's own.
...
Hindsight makes all such statement far more tidy than it ever in fact was or could be. As a young man trying to get a purchase on what most concerned me—the issue of my own life and its statement in writing—I knew little if anything of what might be happening. I had gone through a usual education in the East, had witnessed in shock the terrifying conclusion of humans killing one another, had wobbled back to college, married (mistakenly) in the hope of securing myself emotionally, had wandered into the woods just that I had no competence to keep things together in the city, even left the country itself, with my tolerant wife, hoping that some other culture might have news for me I could at last make use of and peace with. But the world, happily or unhappily, offers only one means of leaving, and I was returned without relief again and again to the initial need: a means of making articulate the world in which I and all like me did truly live.

...I could not easily use a previous mode of writing that wasn't consequence of my own literal experience. I couldn't write like Eliot, for example, I couldn't even depend upon Stevens, whose work then much attracted me...

Coming to Black Mountain the spring of 1954 was equally gain of that viability in writing without which it, of necessity, atrophies and becomes a literature merely. Robert Duncan, in recent conversation, recalled his own intention then, "to transform American literature into a viable language—that's what we were trying to do..." Speaking of Frank O'Hara, he noted that extraordinary poet's attempt "to keep the demand on the language as operativeso that something was at issue all the time, and, at the same time, to make it almost like chatter on the telephone that nobody was going to pay attention to before... that the language gain what was assumed before to be its trivial uses. I'm sort of fascinated that trivial means the same thing as three (Hecate). Trivial's the crisis, where it always blows..."
...
Duncan recalls that painters of his interest were already "trying to have something happen in painting" and that painting was "moving away from the inertness of its being on walls and being looked at..." 
...
In his Autobiography, published in 1951, Williams reprints the opening section of "Projective Verse," feeling it "an advance of estimable proportions"... Earlier, seeing the text in manuscript, he had responded enthusiastically, noting that "Everything leans on the verb." Energy and field are insistently in mind in his attempt to desentimentalize accumulated senses of poetry by asserting its thingness. He uses his friend, the painter Charles Sheeler, as context: "The poem (in Charles' case the painting) is the construction in understandable limits of his life..."
...
Just as Williams had to fight all his life the curious stigma which labelled him "antipoetic" (a term unintentionally provided by Wallace Stevens in an introduction to his work, which Stevens wanted to separate from saccharine notions of poetry), so we had to fight to gain a specific diction common to lives then being lived. No doubt the implicit energy of such language was itself attractive, but the arguments against it, coming primarily from the then powerful New Critics, made its use an exhausting battle. Allen Ginsberg remembers coming offstage after his early readings of Howl often so nervously worn out and shocked by the public antagonism, that he'd go to the nearest toilet to vomit. In contrast—and in grotesque parallel indeed to what was the literal condition of the 'world'—we both remembered the authoritative critical works of the time we were in college, books with titles like The Rage for Order and The Well Wrought Urn. Whatever was meant by The Armed Vision, the guns were seemingly pointed at us.

There was also the idea, call it, that poets as Ginsberg or myself were incapable of the formal clarities that poetry, in one way or another, has obviously to do with. Even now, at public readings... someone inevitably (and too often one of my colleagues in teaching) will ask me if I've ever considered using rhyme? It blows my mind! I can't for the life of me figure out where they are in so-called time and space. As Pound pointed out, we don't all of us occupy the same experience of those situations, no matter we may be alive together in the same moment and place(一笑).

When my first wife and I decided at last to separate in 1955, we met in New York to discuss the sad responsibilities of that fact... I remember we were walking along Eighth Street not far from the Cedar Bar, and suddenly there was Philip Guston, across the street, waving to us. My wife had not met him, and I had but recently... and had found him a deeply generous and articulate man... Once we were seated, she let him have it: how do you know when a painting is finished (painting the way you do). He answered very openly and clearly. Given the field of the painting, so to speak, given what might energize it as mass, line, color, etc.—when he came to that point where any further act would be experienced as a diminishment of that tension (when there was nothing more to do , in short), that was when he felt the painting was finished. She let the matter rest, but I knew she felt almost complacently dissatisfied. "He doesn't know what he is doing—he's just fooling around." She, like so many others then and now, did feel that there must be an intention factually outside the work itself, something to be symbolized there, some content elsewise in mind there expressed, as they say. But that a process—again to emphasize it—might be felt and acted upon as crucial in itself she had not considered. So a statement such as Olson's "We do what we know before we know what we do" would be only a meaningless conundrum at best. I guess she thought we were all dumb. 

Far from it, for whatever use it proved. There was, first of all, a dearly held to sense of one's professionalism, as Duncan reminded me, and all of us practiced the art which involved us as best we could... (the painters) know, as do the poets related, the state of the language—in a sense parallel to the scientist's saying something is in a volatile or inert state—so that "we do convey what we mean" and there is attention to what is happening in every part of the work, to keep "a tension throughout."

The diversity of possibilities gained by such an intensive inquiry... At times it may seem almost too large an invitation to accept, and in any situation where it is used either for convenience or habit, an expectable bag of tricks, then whatever it may have generated is at an end...

Possibly the complex of circumstances which made the years 1950 to 1965 so decisive in the arts will not easily recur. No one can make it up, so to speak. But there were clearly years before, equally decisive, and there will no doubt be those now after. This clothes-line is at best an invention of pseudo-history, and the arts do not intend to be history in this way, however much they use the traditions intimate to their practice. When Duncan saw Olson for the last time, in hospital a few days before his death, he said to him, "important as history was to you, there are no followers—and as a matter of fact that isn't what happened in poetry." Olson grinned, and Duncan added, "It was an adventure..."

...As Duncan said of Olson's sense of a city, "You have to confront it and get with it," not "straighten it out. Optimism and pessimism have nothing to do with being alive." The question more aptly is, "How much aliveness is found in living in a city,"...

But none of this, finally, has anything to do with any such argument at all. As Wittgenstein charmingly says, "A point in space is a place for an argument." You'll have to tell mother we're still on the road. Placitas, N.M. August 28, 1974"

-Robert Creeley, On the Road: Notes on Artists & Poets, 1950–1965. From (https://publishing.cdlib.org/ucpressebooks/view?docId=ft4t1nb2hc&chunk.id=d0e13096&toc.depth=1&toc.id=d0e13090&brand=ucpress;query=Upanishads#1)